高考考前写作辅导

高考考前写作辅导内容摘要：

* 35% *5% scholarships *15% *5% The ine of the American and the Chinese students es through almost the same channels:parents, parttime jobs and scholarships, but the percentage of each is quite different. Half the American students’ ine is from their parents, thirtyfive percent from from part time jobs, and fifteen from scholarships. Chinese students, on the other hand, get niy percent of their ine from their parents. In my opinion, there are two main reasons for this. One is that Chinese parents care so much for their children that it is almost unthinkable for students to live on their own. The other is that Chinese students have fewer chances to find parttime jobs. 小结： 1。 确定主题；理清结构。 2。 信息归类；支撑论点。 （相同；不同） 3。 上下连贯；逻辑清晰。 （正确使用连接词） 4。 首位呼应； 紧扣扣题。 Wish you success 写作常见错误： 1 动词与主语关系不清 误： I saw an old man going out of City Park and was about to cross Park Road. 正： I saw an old man going out of City Park and he was about to cross Park Road. 误： But the car ran off immediately instead of stopping to apologize to the man. 正： But the driver drove off immediately instead of stopping to apologize to the man. 误： The park should charge the entrance fee. 正： The entrance fee should be c。