高二英语怎样写好作文

高二英语怎样写好作文内容摘要：

h him because my English teacher is not a native Englishman. And I think you can anize some sports games, such as playing volleyball, going swimming. I like sports. I hope you can adopt my advice. Yours truly, Li ping Sample Common problems: 1. The passage is wordy. I also hope I can join the English Corner so I and foriegner teacher can talk English with each other. I think I can improve speaking English by municate with him because my English teacher is not a trueborn Englishman. ( 40 words) I’d like to attend the English Corner so I can municate with others in English. In this way, I hope to improve my spoken English. ( 25words) Common problems: in Chinese and writing in Chinglish eg: As to me,I’d like to attend the English lectures because it can enlarge our knowledge by listening to more lectures. For me, I’d like to attend the English lectures. Doing that will enlarge our knowledge. (no effective conjunctions) I like sports. I hope you can adopt my advice. I like sports very much, so I hope you can adopt my advice. (I) Improve the wordy sentence like to learn to sing English songs better. 2. We also help people from other countries to learn Chinese. the not too far future, our dreams will e true. will have the party in the garden which is on the top of the main building. also like to go to places where we can learn more about culture of old China in Beijing. (prefer) foreigners (near) (We will have the party in the garden on the top of the main building.) I also like to go to more places of interest in Beijing. 6. The gifts should be wrapped up and a few words of best wishes should be written on them by you. 7. Next the text will be gone through by us and then the main idea will be found. Next, let’s go through the text and find the main idea. You should wrap up the gif。